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Aging Darkness.
Contributed by
deathdrop
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Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 12:00:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Time consumes,
all within us,
we age per second,
we slowly rust.
life wears at us,
pulling us down,
wearing us out,
to face the ground.
happiness is something,
thats good to recieve.
but its hard to gain,
and quick to leave.
sadness is something,
that sticks in your soul,
rots you to darkness,
then eats you whole!
Copyright ©
deathdrop
... [
2004-04-18 12:00:25]
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Re: Aging Darkness.
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by Queen_Dolly on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 12:02:06 PM AEST
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Beautifully expressed and so true =)
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Re: Aging Darkness.
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by bernard on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 12:27:45 PM AEST
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A most profound poem with much truth within its lines. Thanks.
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Re: Aging Darkness.
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by arden on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 11:23:53 AM AEST
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i really liked this. dark and really awesome. well done keep it up.
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Re: Aging Darkness.
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 11:52:30 PM AEST
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| this was very true in many aspects. nice write. =] |
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