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The pain i feel inside

Contributed by Amanda-Ruth on Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 10:36:35 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



Please dear God,please take away,
These feelings of worry and pain.
Please let me laugh, share a joke,
And help me to smile again

I know I'm not asking a lot,
And it seems so minor to say,
But if you take this pain away,
I will thank you every day

It started so small,this pain i feel,
So little and easy to bare,
But now it seems to take control,
And it follows me everywhere

I feel so worried and lonely inside,
As if i can't cope alone,
I need you now by my side,
So I never need feel alone

I'm really trying to help myself,
by doing everyday things,
But then why dear God,Why do i fear,
What the next morning brings?

It's a deep down pain, that i feel inside,
A pain that always fails to go,
A pain that hurts my heart and soul,
More than you'll ever know

Please answer my small prayer today,
And please wipe my tears away,
Then i will be forever thanking you,
Much more than i could ever say....




Copyright © Amanda-Ruth ... [ 2004-04-18 10:36:35]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: The pain i feel inside (User Rating: 1 )
by Ali on Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 10:47:40 AM AEST
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I can relate to this, I don't think you can ask someone else to get rid of it, you have to do it yourself for it to go away for good.


Re: The pain i feel inside (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 01:24:46 PM AEST
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Just keep on smiling and keep on writing, this is a very good heartfelt poem i'm sure you've got more to come!

wildej.


Re: The pain i feel inside (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 01:59:44 PM AEST
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Another good write.... the pain you feel was well described.. I hope you find the strength to over come it soon...
Hugs
Jenni




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