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Quietness
Contributed by
little_genna
on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 08:54:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
ApologyPoetry
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In my quietness, you think there something wrong.
It’s just me trying to be mentally strong.
Yet I am drained.
If only I could explain.
You ask if I’m ok, I always say I’m fine.
Or do you really thinking I’m spinning you a line?
I would like to share my thoughts and feelings,
But I can’t see you dealing.
If I caved in and let you in,
You would begin,
To see that I am not all here.
If only you could hear.
You would probably go crazy.
So I’m going to stay lazy.
I cannot share my thoughts and feelings yet,
As it’s an unsafe bet.
I am sorry.
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little_genna
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2004-04-18 08:54:30]
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Re: Quietness
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by Jackee_line on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 09:07:50 AM AEST
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Re: Quietness
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by lonely_kakashi on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 12:09:30 PM AEST
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hmmmm, think thats bout all im gonna say
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Re: Quietness
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by face-in-the-crowd on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 01:18:32 PM AEST
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Yet ANOTHER excellent write, hun! Nice work!
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