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Heritage
Contributed by
ESM
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Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 07:43:43 AM in AEST
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Heritage Day is a day to remember
And is celebrated every September
We should all cherish our past
And make sure that it can last
Heritage is a very important word
And should live on like a beautiful bird
Heitage day is a special day
And is beautiful in every way
All of us know about Heritage Day
It is a day that comes our way
Every year so we should not really fear
And to enjoy it every time it is near
Our Heritage should endure
So we can always remain pure
Our Heritage should be plum
For all generations to come
We should all remember our past
Because it is disappearing very fast
So what we should really page
Is to remember our true Heritage
Copyright ©
ESM
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2004-04-18 07:43:43]
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Re: Heritage
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 11:22:45 AM AEST
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I didn't know about heritage day - as this must be an exclusively American occassion, if I am to guess. Good attempt a rhyme, ESM, with an interesting subject matter that informed and mildly entertained me.
I don't think you need to be quite so defensive about future posts, as there are other poets here with less talent . . . |
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Re: Heritage
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by reprobate on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 07:00:28 PM AEST
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| amusing...I would have given it a three just for the cuteness factor. guess that's a moot point..........................'higher than 1 or else' or else what? not allowed to celebrate? oh, well. |
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Re: Heritage
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by bernard on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 03:45:32 AM AEST
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Threats are of course a part of daily living but to be threatened to mark a poem. Sorry either a poem pleases or it does not. Apart from that I have never heard of a heritage day???
Try again with another poem this time without threats.
bernard |
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