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Kill You
Contributed by
corrupted_minds
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Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 02:57:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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I WANT TO ******* KILL YOU,
EAT YOU UP INSIDE,
TAKE OUT YOUR GUTS AND BONES,
UNTILL I HEAR YOU CRY,
CRY LIKE YOU MAKE ME CRY,
WHIMPER LIKE I DID,
AND THEN I'LL KEEP GOING,
JUST LIKE YOU KEPT ON ******* ME,
KEPT ON KILLING ME WITH EACH MOVEMENT,
EACH TIME YOU DID IT,
KILLIN ME ABIT MORE,
I'LL MAKE YOU FEEL THE PAIN,
IN WHICH YOU CURSED UPON ME,
I'LL SEE YOU BLEED EVERY DROP,
UNTILL THE DEED IS DONE,
THIS IS HOW MUCH YOU HURT ME,
THIS IS WHAT YOU DESERVE,
AND WHEN YOU ARE DEAD,
I'LL FINISH OFF MYSELF,
then.....
... i'll finally be at peace
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Re: Kill You
(User Rating: 1 ) by jaeann on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 03:23:00 AM AEST (User
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don't apologize........good rant !!!! you came across just fine...... |
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Re: Kill You
(User Rating: 1 ) by bernard on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 04:03:28 AM AEST (User
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Good way to let off steam. How about a poem in the other direction. More positive remember a smile a day keeps the Doctors away.
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Re: Kill You
(User Rating: 1 ) by WorthlesSanity666 on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 11:15:20 AM AEST (User
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Awsome! You rock! Like they said, don't appologize!!! I write plenty of poems about killing people!! It is a great release of stress. Your poem was very powerful. I really enjoyed it. I hope you feel better, though. I love blood... |
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