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Mirror Mirror on the Wall
Contributed by
patar420
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Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 07:53:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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take the mirror down from the wall
look into it slowly
horrified at what i see
i scream, it shatters
glass on the floor
i step on top of it
i dont even feel pain
i walk, blood runs
dark red foot prints
shadows begin to crawl
i slid down slowly
i breath, room spins
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Re: Mirror Mirror on the Wall
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by alasdaircairns on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 07:59:11 PM AEST
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| Scary poem mate. But scary in a good way. Hope you're ok though!!!! |
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Re: Mirror Mirror on the Wall
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by nail-to-the-head on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 08:13:51 PM AEST
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wow! truely touching poem. nice structure.
+ nail-to-the-head + |
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