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Repetition
Contributed by
MidwestFreek
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Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 07:06:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
hbadday
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Lost, found, lost again
Its a ruthless cycle, it will not end
Pain, love, pain galore
It's what I get with an open door
Stab, heal, stab round two
The price to pay for loving you
The anguish, the pleasure, the in between
The results of emotions gone unseen
Thats just a taste of what happens when
I'm lost, found, and lost again
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2004-04-17 19:06:26]
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Re: Repetition
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by alasdaircairns on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 07:12:28 PM AEST
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| This is a brillliant use of the English word. Your language reflecting the theme of the poem - very clever. The price of love is often high! Great work:-) |
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Re: Repetition
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by Kie on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 07:38:31 PM AEST
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Well I certainly could relate to this one. I'm a member of the lost and found club of repetition.
LOL!
Excellent poem.
Kie |
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Re: Repetition
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by Key-holeGolf on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 06:20:37 PM AEST
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This is really awesome. One of the best (in my mind) poems i've seen. It's clever, but it still uses words I understand, a really underated quality!!!
Especially like the way that you summarised it with "thats just a taste", but also used this it to bring it back to the start. Fantastic idea to show what a horror love is, repeatedly dumping on you, through making the poem a loop.
Really really really great. love it! |
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Re: Repetition
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by Rxqueen on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 08:53:32 AM AEST
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| I love the beat of this poem. It is really good. |
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Re: Repetition
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by sick_n_twisted on
Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 06:44:34 PM AEST
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i love this poem its really good i escially loe this line Stab, heal, stab round two
The price to pay for loving you
but i really like it! |
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Re: Repetition
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by Supergurl1071 on
Sunday, 8th May 2005 @ 08:31:23 PM AEST
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| Great Emotion!!!! I love your use of words and you capture what love feels like most of the time. Keep writing! |
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Re: Repetition
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by shortcut on
Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 11:12:46 PM AEST
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| Yep, sums up love nicely. Stinks and then great, then stinks- your words are much better though. |
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