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Insane
Contributed by
Alli
on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 06:54:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I am insane
Never understood the rain
Splashing on my window pane
Always seems the same
Never understood the pain
Everyday it is the same
What's happening to my brain
I am completely insane.
2000
Copyright ©
Alli
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2004-04-17 18:54:24] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Insane
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 07:02:40 PM AEST (User
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Good work Alli.
Sometimes insanity is a good thing.
Actually I've always made it a point to be different. Insanity, many times of others can push the sane ones of the ledge.
Very creative write, luved it.
luv, huggs, insanity,
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Re: Insane
(User Rating: 1 ) by hearmyvoice on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 09:13:01 PM AEST (User
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very creative, great way of expressing yourself |
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Re: Insane
(User Rating: 1 ) by Necromant on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 01:55:30 PM AEST (User
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Oh what a poem! (It made me laugh I know it's dark and I feel sorry for laughing but actually it makes me insane too) one of my fav songs is I'm going slightly mad so... there you have it..
Great write!
Anne :D |
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