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Surrendered
Contributed by
brookiecookie02
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Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 06:35:18 PM in AEST
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ChristianPoetry
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I surrender to you
No matter what I have to do
I won't jump to be in command
I will lay things in your hands
Whatever I have to do
I will only serve you
The spirit from above
Has filled me up with love
I will love one another
As if they were my brother
I can't be perfect but I'll try
And I will try not to ask why
Even if it doesn't make sense
I know you will find a way
For it to turn out alright
If I do as you say
Lord I'll do what you want me to do
Because I'm surrendered to you
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brookiecookie02
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Re: Surrendered
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 06:52:59 PM AEST (User
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First welcom to our global familly here.
Very beautifull write. Once we surrender then heaven is ours.
Very good work and I'm looking forward to more.
luv, huggs, faith, joy,
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Re: Surrendered
(User Rating: 1 ) by faithmairee on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 06:53:57 PM AEST (User
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I'm glad I get to be the first one to comment on your first poem. First, I want to extend a very warm welcome to you. This is a great site and I feel sure you are going to emjoy your stay.
Your poem was truly awesome. Complete surrender is my goal but in order to do it i must set aside my ego which said another was as asing God Out! My thoughts on your poem are that is an excellent piece of work. I will be looking forward to reading more of your wonderful work'...This one definitely deserves a 5 star rating!
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Re: Surrendered
(User Rating: 1 ) by ShadowDaughter on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 07:30:51 PM AEST (User
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Nicely done, and welcome :-).
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Re: Surrendered
(User Rating: 0 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 07:42:07 PM AEST (User
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You know what I think....
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Re: Surrendered
(User Rating: 0 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 09:21:35 PM AEST (User
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Very good! A prayer we should all pray! keep posting! |
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Re: Surrendered
(User Rating: 1 ) by Brians_Sweety on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 07:20:25 PM AEST (User
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I know its been a while since you put this here but I couldn't go without commenting on it. GREAT WRITE that is soo awesome I know exactly how you feel. Its nice to know there are other Christians that feel the same way I do. If you would like feel free to PM me anytime!!
Stephanie |
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