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My love gost
Contributed by
lexxie
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Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 06:06:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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I think of what we had, what we shared as i walk to the grave i leave the inprint of my shoe in the mud I feel myself cry as I read my name upon the stone.
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Re: My love gost
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kie on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 06:38:59 PM AEST (User
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Short and eerie.
Hauntingly so.
Well done..
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Re: My love gost
(User Rating: 1 ) by kidpoet_213 on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 08:09:02 PM AEST (User
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I agree with Kie... short... eerie and haunting!! y the way it's spelled ghost... sorry couldn't resist... lol... I knew what u meant though...lol
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Re: My love gost
(User Rating: 1 ) by Wachumiri on
Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 12:37:23 AM AEST (User
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Interesting... I really like the thought of this, the perspective.
Take care, I mean it.
David |
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