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one charmed forest night
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 06:01:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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in the sunset's rim, when moonlight glimmered dim,
to the dawn when i chanted my own weird hymn,
where silence masters all, and light my footsteps fall,
beneath the moon; i heard a hauntingly captivating tune,
upon the earth where great longings are;
when dreams doth seem so far,
i passed through the path of the mist;
like a pale spirit by spirits kissed,
here until the end of time lastingly long;
heard in the whispers of the winds song,
came spirits of the forest and of nature;
gathering all small and great creatures,
though forest somewhat dark and drear;
i listened closely; from creatures you may hear,
givin nary a thought to enchantments seen;
enterin; he walked in slowly wearin cool green,
he calmly petted some wild beasts;
waved his hand and there was a feast,
cuppin his hands he scooped up sleep;
way inside the forest deep,
all earthly creatures rested with ease;
under gentle breeze and mystic trees,
there they all sat under the mighty oak;
the unicorn gave the dragon a poke,
the whippoorwills came from beyond the hills,
the owl too, he ate his fill,
then along came mousie bess;
smoothly ridin in on the wings of pegasus,
with light like hope to mortals given;
spirits of dead in life again stood before me livin,
round quiverin moonbeams faeries played;
singin whistful songs of lovelorn melodies,
hanging the stars like seeds of light;
there is nay anything more bright,
ever boastin their bright creative fires;
above constraint my poetic soul aspired,
of mighty wonderful things that came to pass;
it was like sweetest dewdrops upon the grass,
then moon of enchantment no longer shone;
because the faeries and lord of woods had gone,
after a night long; hearts were blazing like new dawn;
forest beings all had a great yawn,
when i left squirrels were laughin over acorn wine;
yeah, said they, this spring meeting was fine,
i called to these dwellers by the forest's door;
hearing their voices along the forest floor;
my hearts enchantment evermore.
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Re: one charmed forest night
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 06:09:16 PM AEST
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This is beautiful hun, the words and- everything- its wonderful and the pictures are cute (if not a little weird) lmao
Love 'n hugs
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Re: one charmed forest night
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 06:28:49 PM AEST
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The pictures are wonderful (where do you get them? how do you get them on?) and the words, the poetry...is magical. It takes me somewhere I wish I always was. Great description, excellent style. A masterpiece as always.
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Re: one charmed forest night
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by Kie on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 06:37:05 PM AEST
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"it was like sweetest dewdrops upon the grass,
then moon of enchantment no longer shone;
because the faeries and lord of woods had gone,"
By the time I got to these three lines I was hopelessly enchanted. I thought the picture was excellent to enhance the imagery. You have an artistic gift for choosing the write picture.
Oh and I loved the title. I just wanted to jump inside the poem.
Well done..
Kie
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Re: one charmed forest night
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by Cynthia on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 06:57:03 PM AEST
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| Oh Nessa, what an enchanting write. I loved it. Very beautiful. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: one charmed forest night
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by New_York_Chick on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 07:46:47 PM AEST
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magicly beautiful
what a sweet poem |
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Re: one charmed forest night
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by emystar on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 08:18:41 PM AEST
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A very charming write!
Girl u got it going on!
A masterpeice, indeed!
luv, huggs, faith, hope,
emy |
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Re: one charmed forest night
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by alasdaircairns on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 08:21:56 PM AEST
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| As a resident of cornwall I must say this sums up the secret magic of the forest so perfectly. Simply wonderful. Magical words!!!!! |
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Re: one charmed forest night
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 09:52:12 PM AEST
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Oh Ness..this is charmingggggggg..... I loved it.....
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: one charmed forest night
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by AnGeL_M on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 11:51:32 PM AEST
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Very Beautiful Nessa I Love It !!!!!! The Pictures Are Wonderful....Keep Em Coming :-)
******LoVe**AnGeL*******
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Re: one charmed forest night
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 02:45:14 AM AEST
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Enchanting read.....I know I was enchanted by it and many more will surely be.
Such wonderful images, an inspiring piece
steve |
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Re: one charmed forest night
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 11:18:06 AM AEST
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Enchanting, magical, spellbinding.......it's good to see you writing with such happiness and lightheartedness again Nessa. :o)
A breathtaking write that took me to dreamland.
Roses
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Re: one charmed forest night
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by ThePumpkinKing on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 12:24:38 PM AEST
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| a straight up enchanting write here...awesome job |
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Re: one charmed forest night
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 01:59:00 PM AEST
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a magical journey...
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Re: one charmed forest night
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by Merry on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 04:04:05 PM AEST
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oh so charming and full of great lore - I had to take a peek out to the woods to make sure - there were no faieires dancing or Lords of the Wood carrying on - but I did see a couple of squirrels acting rather odd.
A wonderful celebration of nature
daisy*merry
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Re: one charmed forest night
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by Lost_Shadow on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 03:48:50 PM AEST
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| Wow, this poem is great, it's just like a place I find myself in when I am in a kind of trance. My own fantasy world. I love it. ::hugs n kisses:: |
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Re: one charmed forest night
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by Soulless on
Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 07:16:15 PM AEST
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Wonderful passion and expression flowing in and out of the words you write.
I wish I could just book mark your name.
Kisses,
~Soulless~ |
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