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Crying the night away
Contributed by
luckycharm
on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 05:32:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The tears that run slowly down my face,
Turn into deep blue seas,
I have to get away form this place,
So I won't be caught up in misery,
The lies which come towards me,
Won't help me rise again,
It's like things won't let me be,
Or is it just a sin,
I'm sick and tired of hearing the blues,
Being so confused,
Feeling like I'm used,
Boy what's the use,
I see broken glass,
Just shattered into pieces,
I see your days pass,
As if though you are leaving,
I need someone to wash away the pain,
Protect me from the rain,
As it keeps falling down,
And there's no one around,
The comotion we go through,
The emotion of loving you,
Just stays in my mind,
It's like I can't find,
That special boy in my world,
To share this life with me,
Am I the only girl,
Who can't find destiny,
I wan't to regain,
The strength in me,
I wan't to replace,
The love within me,
So when I finally get you,
It will just be me and you,
And this time I'm not losing your love,
Many people may think that I,
Won't be alright,
Trust me if I have been living this life alone,
Nothing can hold me back,
But that boy's love,
And it's like I keep saying this over and over again,
But this time I have to win,
His heart so I can feel free,
I just don't need to be,
Crying the night away
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Re: Crying the night away
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by Jackee_line on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 05:35:40 PM AEST
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A very good write, with alot of emotion. I totally relate to this.
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Re: Crying the night away
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 05:38:13 PM AEST
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Buck up little camper, things will get better, I promise. Great write
Lindsey |
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Re: Crying the night away
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by lonely_kakashi on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 06:15:22 PM AEST
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well written and alot of emotion,
hope things sort themselves out
:D
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Re: Crying the night away
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by brookiecookie02 on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 06:39:22 PM AEST
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i really like this poem!!
u did a great job
i cant wait to see more of ur work |
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Re: Crying the night away
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by xoblondiebabix3 on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 07:15:34 PM AEST
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i enjoyed this poem a lot i can really relate to it:) xcellent write!!
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Re: Crying the night away
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 01:30:52 PM AEST
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Notch up another good one!
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Re: Crying the night away
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by TwEeK on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 08:05:48 PM AEST
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W0W!!! such an emotial poem, i felt like crying! i know how you feel, all alone, like you'll never find that special someone in your life......i've been there.........try not to worry, some times it takes poeple longer to find love, but hey! wouldnt it be better just to find an actual true love than going along with the crowd and getting into relation ships that dont last and have no meaning, its wayyy better to find an actual love than to just have some meaningless flings!!
dont worry, youll get your chance soon enough to experiance it all.
TwEeKy
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