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SINK
Contributed by
PRECIOUSBECKY
on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 05:20:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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MY HEART FEELS AS ABANDONED AS THE WILTED WILDFLOWERS GROWING IN DRIED UP PATCHES OF GRASS ON THE SIDE OF A PAVED ROAD.
I FEEL AS DESOLATE AS THE CACTUS MUST FEEL OUT THERE IN THE HOT BARRON DESERT.
IT BECAME SO REAL TO ME
SHE'S TRULY THERE AND YOU'RE THERE WITH HER!
I FELT A SHARP PAIN-
A SINKING SHIP IN A VAST OCEAN-
NOWHERE TO GO -
NOT AN ISLAND IN SIGHT.
I'M STRUGGLING TO STAY ABOVE THESE ENORMOUS WAVES-
THAT SEEM TO ENGULF MY SOUL AT SUCH A RAPID PACE.............
I SEE YOUR FACE..........
I FEEL LIKE A STORM-
TURNING
CHURNING
A TWISTING OF EMOTION!
I TOUCH THE SUN AND BURN WITH PAIN.........
YOU CUT ME AS I TOUCH YOU-------
EDUARDO BOUCHEZ
Copyright ©
PRECIOUSBECKY
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2004-04-17 17:20:16]
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Re: SINK
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by Jackee_line on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 05:29:38 PM AEST
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| Well done , a nice write. |
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Re: SINK
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by Kie on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 06:48:50 PM AEST
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I could see those wildflowers and I felt so much pain in this poem.
Well done.
Kie |
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Re: SINK
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by alasdaircairns on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 08:56:46 PM AEST
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| Such a sad poem. Hope you get over him as you desrve better. Very impactive write. |
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