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Time
Contributed by
nail-to-the-head
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Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 03:42:39 PM in AEST
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Time.
What do you think of when the word time is spoken?
About the clocks as they tic-toc-by?
About big ben, waiting to chime?
About how much of your time is spent doing nothing?
About how long you have to wait in que's?
About what all your time is spent on?
About the moments that you have done wrong?
About turning back the clocks to make something right?
About how long we all have left to live?
Time means so many things to all of us.
But how many of us know how precious time really is?
Time.
What does time mean to you?
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Re: Time
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by Ramuel on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 04:06:54 PM AEST
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Good poem, the scheme and structure work well. Good work.
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Re: Time
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by lonely_kakashi on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 04:15:47 PM AEST
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well structured and well written,
Well done
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Re: Time
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by Mortis-Dark on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 04:20:44 PM AEST
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Great write. I like how it kept the reader captivated. Time is a lasrge object in our life. We need and we take. I think you convoyed your emotions welll.
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Re: Time
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by Kie on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 06:51:18 PM AEST
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Food for thought. I am intrigued and fascinated by one word---"time"
A great poem and I thank you for sharing it with us.
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Re: Time
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by arden on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 06:42:18 PM AEST
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a very well thought out poem. written so well. i very much enjoyed this. wonderfully done. keep up the awesome work.
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