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Blood from the heart
Contributed by
lexxie
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Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 01:16:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Sheets coverd from blood not from the wrist but from the heart this is what you have done to me made me cry made me bleed i only wish that this wasent a dream
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lexxie
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2004-04-17 13:16:01]
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Re: Blood from the heart
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by AmaNdAsHepArD on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 02:16:01 PM AEST
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i liked it short and right to the point.........good job
**vamp** |
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Re: Blood from the heart
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 02:16:41 PM AEST
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| Great write! I really enjoyed it!!! I especially liked the twist at the end. You might want to consider diving your poems into lines or stanzas instead of one long sentence. You don't have to follow my advice, but just a suggestion! Good poem, keep it up! |
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Re: Blood from the heart
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by kidpoet_213 on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 08:17:34 PM AEST
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YES!! Short... sweet and to the point... I love it!!
Kep up the good work!!
~Donna~ |
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Re: Blood from the heart
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by Wachumiri on
Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 12:32:12 AM AEST
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It's truely a horrible thing when the heart cries and bleeds. If this is about yours, may it heal. It may tke time, but it will.
Take care.
David |
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