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My Last Goodbye
Contributed by
YoungUnwanted
on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 12:26:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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This is me smiling
Pretending I'm fine
I know I'm lying
But I try not to cry
This is me crying
How fragile I seem
I shake and sob
Holding back a scream
This is me screaming
"Don't you see I'm a fake?"
I'm struggling to live
About to break
This is me breaking
As I grab the knife
I'm gonna give up
Can't take this life
This is me dancing
Ready to die
Singing sweetly
My last goodbye
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YoungUnwanted
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2004-04-17 12:26:17]
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Re: My Last Goodbye
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by afraid_of_fear on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 12:29:12 PM AEST
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wow.. i love this..
charlotte x_x_x |
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Re: My Last Goodbye
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by xoblondiebabix3 on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 12:52:54 PM AEST
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i can relate to this poem a lot!! well put!
thank you for putting what i feel and how others might feel into words
well done
~*xObeaOx*~ |
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Re: My Last Goodbye
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by saha on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 12:57:26 PM AEST
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| wow, really great poem, don't give up and keep writing .................. sandra |
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