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Thats Life
Contributed by
alecfernadez
on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 11:44:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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As silence rears its ugly head,
The ashes of the dawn choke me,
As the walls keep closing in,
The embers of the day ignite me
And its all elementary,
A Hilton bar of soap,
Thats simpy complementary,
And thats life
And thats life
As shadows cross my lonly lawn,
Darkness consumes me whole,
As the light never appears,
I realize I'm trapped in a hole
And its all elementary,
A Hilton bar of soap,
Thats simpy complementary,
And thats life
And thats life
As this blood I continue to draw,
Seeps through/below the floor,
As my pain reveals itself in sores,
I complement my forgotten art
of blood letting
And thats life
And thats life
Sostareatsomeoneelsewhenyoutrytopunchmyfaceinwithyourtwotiming*****causingfistsasiflickbloodatyoufrommywrsitsnothisfaggotiownyoubecauseiamyouandyourdeadjustasmesocontinuethislifeofregretandi'llshowyoualifethatyoucannotforgetsoshutupanddie
Andthats life
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Re: Thats Life
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by Ramuel on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 11:55:52 AM AEST
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This is one of the more expressive poems I've seen around here so far. The repetition is very effective.
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Re: Thats Life
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by arden on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 02:34:42 AM AEST
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very awesome poem alec. i was really impressed with it.
amazing.
5 stars
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