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An End to War
Contributed by
sheri
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Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 10:22:09 AM in AEST
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Peace takes no prisoners
nor does it take lives
what are we really fighting for
is it worth this bloody price
I yearn for an end to war
that will last days
weeks
years
even better , centuries
the end that will make no mother cry
over a slain soldier
I thrist for the knowledege that someday
this planets inhabitants
will love and respect life more
then greed or military might.
Copyright ©
sheri
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2004-04-17 10:22:09]
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Re: An End to War
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by bernard on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 10:29:30 AM AEST
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I say Amen to this Sheri. Too many wars too many deaths not to mention the wounded and badly maimed or burned. War is and always was a bloody turmoil of hate and or greed. Thankyou for your poem.
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Re: An End to War
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by Ramuel on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 11:41:26 AM AEST
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Besides clearly conveying a good message, this is a good poem. Good flow and structure. A nice peice.
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Re: An End to War
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by alasdaircairns on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 08:26:54 PM AEST
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| I couldn't agree more! This poem is so true. When will the hurt end? Great style. x |
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Re: An End to War
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by arden on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 12:16:33 PM AEST
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how true. a really great write. perfect keep it up.
Arden |
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