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A full food basket for Africa by 2020
Contributed by
ESM
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Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 08:23:46 AM in AEST
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Africa is a great place
To find a very kind face
We must always help each other
Like we are all a good brother
We need to work on a big solution
To stop our serious pollution
So we can live in a beautiful home
To live to be free for all to roam
There are many imperative problems to consider
And must be solved so our continent will not wither
Some of these problems are famine, AIDS and poverty
And we should solve these for Africa is our property
In places of famine and thirst
We should get a good solution first
Before it destroys our nation
And kills this big population
We all need to wrack our brains
And make sure it certainly rains
To feed this continent
And make it omnipotent
An appropriate solution is waiting there
All we need is to show our gentle care
To work hand in hand
To save this great land
Our continent should act very responsible
So this problem does not become impossible
Our deadline is the great 2020
But that is more than plenty
Copyright ©
ESM
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Re: A full food basket for Africa by 2020
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by bernard on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 09:13:48 AM AEST
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Good strong writing the subject matter is very serious and it is in the hopes of allof us that Africa will one day live in peace and harmony with famine and thist. Just one word I thought was out of place in your poem, the word omnipotent. did you just use it to make up the rhyme? Thanks for a good strong read.
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Re: A full food basket for Africa by 2020
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by Remy on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 02:09:45 PM AEST
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very intersting write, not many dare touch upon a subject like this. it sounds hopeful, i like that... ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: A full food basket for Africa by 2020
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by reprobate on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 05:25:26 PM AEST
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| expressive and impressive. Good job. |
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Re: A full food basket for Africa by 2020
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by sheri on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 09:08:02 PM AEST
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| Very good write. |
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Re: A full food basket for Africa by 2020
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 09:32:31 PM AEST
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| interesting. but the problems of africa also plague the world and even worse so. if global warming keeps up, they say many coasts and countries will disappear into the sea. but humans have brought their fate down on themselves with their thinking that they can change it. humans dont adapt, they adapt everything else to them. its as simple as that. |
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