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It Matters Not
Contributed by
Vitreous_Soul
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Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 08:14:03 AM in AEST
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O'er purling waters of oceans azure
And whirling crosswinds from depthless fissure
'Top mountain's spire, a zenith unsure
Through fountain of tears runs ardour so pure
When beclouded by deep shadows of doubt
Or enshrouded with all feelings devout
To extrude two souls from a destined route
To intrude betwixt; leaving hearts without
Broken heart in shattered wisps
Seems truculent time forgot
Faith-born gale renews concord
In the end time matters not
From elliptic dreams, sleep insentient
To cryptic visions of virtue besprent
A desire great for wishes content
To inspire life with ev'ry moment
'Neath candescent moon, in cascading sheen
In prominent June, ignites verdant green
Through windows flung wide, gaze landscapes serene
Crescendos astride, reverie pristine
Distant souls, two worlds apart
Fadeless bond, concurrent thought
Pearl wind carries love abroad
Longest distance matters not
In days ahead, despite discord
Prevail ordeals, find what was sought
At rainbow's end lies treasure bright
In pearl wind's touch our bliss was caught
Remember this, forget the tests---
In God's embrace they matter not
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Re: It Matters Not
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by starlight_dancer on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 08:20:36 AM AEST
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wow! Dan that is so beautiful, and it means so much to me as well. The rhythm, the way it flows. I love it all. It means more to me than I think you'll ever realise
Yet another awesome write from you! I can't beleive how many you reel out! It's just amazing.
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Re: It Matters Not
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by PRECIOUSBECKY on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 08:23:13 AM AEST
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THIS IS SUCH A BEAUTIFUL POEM
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Re: It Matters Not
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by Kie on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 08:38:58 AM AEST
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It is a very beautiful heartfelt poem.
Soul mates can withstand anything, just cling to each other and it will all work out.
Great poem V.
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Re: It Matters Not
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by blueheart on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 10:21:25 AM AEST
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| I'm not sure I agree with you that everyone has a soul mate but this is a beautiful poem. Top class. |
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Re: It Matters Not
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 05:09:03 PM AEST
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Outstanding write!!!!
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Re: It Matters Not
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 05:31:33 PM AEST
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DaNNYBoY!!!! That was absolutely phenominal. I think you've outdone yourself this time. Positively Gorgeous! Non-pareilled. :) hehe
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Re: It Matters Not
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by emystar on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 08:47:32 PM AEST
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This one rocks!
Great job!
luv, huggs,
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Re: It Matters Not
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 03:50:52 AM AEST
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Now that was something else! great write.
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Re: It Matters Not
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 08:03:02 AM AEST
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I envy your source of inspiration, despite the misgivings I have about such relationships.
Once again, a truly mellifluous work, *grins* Besprent with sparkling diction.
Laudably done. |
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Re: It Matters Not
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by forever_lonely on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 06:06:23 AM AEST
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.... i give up .... my friend, you have shared something that lives so deep within us all and yet so many of us fail to show it ... compassion, passion and heart, this write has lead me to the decision that.. i give up i truly do, my writes could never come close to this not in a million years my friend, amazing is an understatement a huge understatement, so like always my friend i shall just stand here open jaw'd in awe of this :O
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Re: It Matters Not
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by Fionndruinne on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 08:15:54 PM AEST
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It's seldom one finds such an effortless flow of words combined with so true and great a sentiment and vision. The last line was my favorite, and quite deserving to be quoted anywhere.
Bravo!
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Re: It Matters Not
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by Stitch on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 09:19:01 PM AEST
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There are soulmates and at the right time and place they can come together. If it's in God's will it will be. Another awesome write as you well know. Have you found your purpose yet?
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