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Last Night (a stoner poem)
Contributed by
Juggalette_carebear
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Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 02:43:29 AM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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sitting on the street
ciggerette in my mouth
silence all around
but really i wanna scream and shout
tear my clothes off
run down the street
the only thing i wear
is my own heartbeat
get stoned
in a playground
monkey bars above
woodchips on the ground
i can feel music
see it dance
cant shake the sensual feeling
out of my head
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2004-04-17 02:43:29]
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Re: Last Night (a stoner poem)
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 04:45:08 AM AEST
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Intriguing look into a stoner's experience.
I like the way the hit is described -
"i can feel music
see it dance
cant shake the sensual feeling
out of my head"
Good work, Brie. |
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Re: Last Night (a stoner poem)
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by PRECIOUSBECKY on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 08:45:40 AM AEST
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| I DEFINATELY DIG- |
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Re: Last Night (a stoner poem)
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 10:30:06 AM AEST
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"tear my clothes off
run down the street
the only thing i wear
is my own heartbeat"
lol.. she better hope she doesn't get caught.
good poem... I like it! |
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