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Black before my eyes.
Contributed by
0o_Jelly_Bean_o0
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Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 10:14:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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My mind is filled with terror,
My body engulfed by pain,
I feel like my mind is going crazy,
Like my whole world is insane,
Its spinning and its twirling,
Right before my eyes,
They sky it seems is black,
Theres no where to run to hide,
Time is running out,
The clock is about to stop,
I call out please someone help me,
As my body begins to drop.
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2004-04-16 22:14:47]
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Re: Black before my eyes.
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by Rhei76 on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 10:29:42 PM AEST
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Poeticly put,
At times the world does feel
as if it's turned to black, But
keep strong. Somehow
things seem seem to grow back.
So, Jelly Bean nice write,
And take care. |
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Re: Black before my eyes.
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 03:40:06 AM AEST
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Wow.... dont know what to say hon... hate to think of you this sad... big hugs & know my thoughts are with you...
xx's liss |
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