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Final Breath
Contributed by
nail-to-the-head
on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 07:16:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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This is my last tear,
this is my last word,
for soon i shall be gone,
and never again to be heard,
this world was just to much,
your torture to intense,
this small knife is my saviour,
to me, my death makes sense,
this is my last breath,
my final words are here,
to save you from my misery,
and wipe away your tears.
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Re: Final Breath
(User Rating: 1 )
by TwEeK on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 07:32:20 PM AEST
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NO DONT KILL YOUR SELF PLEASE.........
there are people that care about you, out there, somewhere, you just ahve to look and you will find them, eventually, i did.....
TwEeKy
remember the worlds a bad place ut you just have to find the good in it, there is, though how small, it may be |
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Re: Final Breath
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by AspenGlow on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 02:29:55 AM AEST
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| And what is lost by the pity of one, but to see another dawn, and maybe on that dawn another face to love, another kiss to explore. Wait for tomorrows dawn, and realize tomorrow never comes, live is an endless dawn. |
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