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Ebony Princess

Contributed by scorpion on Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 05:24:24 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Her emerald eyes stare into mine,
As her soft ebony skin is etched into my mind.
I can not help the euphoria that is within,
A soul filled with a new begining.

I tremble at the image of a kiss,
A kiss so tender that I just don't want to miss.
Words tremble in sequence,
One by one they lapse in and out of complete eloquence.

I love you, my ebony princess,
Nobody can match your enchanting sweetness,
A soft tender touch of your finger brings fire,
That engulfs me with pure desire.

Your everlasting smile stops my heart a flutter,
While lightening rods are beating against my chest like thunder.
Your love is so tender and sweet,
I can feel it when we meet.

You are a sign of elegant beauty and sheer intelligence,
A kindness of undeniable reverence.
I can not utter the words I want to say,
I love you and honor you for ever in a day.

At night I dream a prayer of mine,
To love and to hold you till the end of time.
Sweet dreams brings forth a wish to take,
To the edge of time in the sea I wake.

Some day we shall be,
Together and free.
Sweet ebony princess take me away,
In a land where nobody shall stray.

Complete commitment in God's grace,
My ebony princess meet me face to face.
Love to hearts, and hearts combine,
Make this heart of mine commit in a shrine.

Some day my ebony princess,
Our love will turn to a marriage that is priceless.
Setting in a sunset next to the heavens above,
We shall always be in love.

Copyright © scorpion ... [ 2004-04-16 17:24:24]
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Re: Ebony Princess (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 06:08:28 PM AEST
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this is really beautiful, i love it, however since you said you are still working on it ill give my two cents; the line "I love you and honor you for ever in a day." i would say 'I love you and honor you forever and a day'... although i also love the way you have it as well... and "Some day we shall be,/Together and free." is a bit short where the rest of your poem is of equal length, so i might say, 'Oh darling, someday we shall be,/Sweetly together and blissfully free' ... just a thought, i usually wont say but you kinda asked, lol, all over your poem is absolutely lovely, and heartfelt sweet:) hugs n' love nessa

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