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Revenge
Contributed by
Queen_Dolly
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Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 04:39:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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He took my heart
I took his smile
Ripped it apart
He's in denial
His pretty face
Now black and bruised
It's such a shame
But he abused
My love, my trust
He's just a boy
And in disgust
I was his toy.
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Queen_Dolly
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2004-04-16 16:39:06]
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Re: Revenge
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 04:59:52 PM AEST
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Ouch!!! That must have hurt!! :>)
Nice write...
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Re: Revenge
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by xoblondiebabix3 on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 05:04:55 PM AEST
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omg this is such a sad poem! I can understand how ur feeling and how boys tend to treat us like toys.. its not right!!!
xcellent write!:~)
kEEp it up!!
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Re: Revenge
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by arden on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 02:54:39 PM AEST
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freaking awesome!! so dark and creepy. i just love this to death. great job great talent. keep it up.
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