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Heart-My-Out-Rip
Contributed by
Queen_Dolly
on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 04:34:42 PM in AEST
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Drag down the razor
My pale flawless skin
Releasing all the beauty
Flowing from within
A bloody pool of hatred
And torment in my eyes
A heart that was once sacred
Now broken by your lies.
Copyright ©
Queen_Dolly
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2004-04-16 16:34:42]
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Re: Heart-My-Out-Rip
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by wyrd_faerie on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 04:37:34 PM AEST
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| this is so amazing...it says so much in so few words...wow... |
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Re: Heart-My-Out-Rip
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by xoblondiebabix3 on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 05:08:04 PM AEST
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this is another awesome poem! I can relate to sum of ur poetry ;-)
WeLL done!
Keep it up!*:)
*XoXoXo* |
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Re: Heart-My-Out-Rip
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 05:23:57 PM AEST
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| well written and very moving:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Heart-My-Out-Rip
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by Nelly on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 04:03:19 AM AEST
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cool. very much revealing. good job = )
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