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To all those they call crazy
Contributed by
lessa
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Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 04:24:07 PM in AEST
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I remember my crazy days,
when I was in the mental hospital
straped to the bed, with thorzen in my blood
I remember when I hated the doctors for keeping me here
and I hated the nurses cause I just knew they didn't REALLY care
I remember when they took my belt and my shoes-laces, they took my jewellery and my bras, I wished them dead for that
they took my freedom, my pride, my independence and my rights
it wasn't that long ago was it, only 2 years,
but I learned to much since then,
I know so much more then I thought I did
I know the doctors and nurses where living their life, they went home at night and thought of me and really cared about my life
it's hard to think that I wish they could see me now
I know they would be proud and tell me they knew everything would be alright
I wish I could tell people going through it now
that one day u will get ur belt back and your favorite jewellery
just let them do their job and maybe try and learn something
I used to cut myself cause the pain felt so good,
now I don't cause there's more to life then that,
I enjoy every day all day, I just wish I could tell others, it will all be ok
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Re: To all those they call crazy
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by face-in-the-crowd on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 04:31:00 PM AEST
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| A very inspiring write, I loved it! It gives off a very nice feeling. Great job! |
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Re: To all those they call crazy
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by afraid_of_fear on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 04:35:47 PM AEST
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this was a really interesting write.. i've been in a mental hospital too.. two actually, although my opinions at the time differ somewhat to yours.. admitted i was never strapped to a bed.. but this was really good write and i hope it helps other people..it should, it's very good..
charlotte x_x_x |
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Re: To all those they call crazy
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 04:38:08 PM AEST
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I'm so glad to read this..... I'm sure this will help others.... Lovely write.
Jenni |
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Re: To all those they call crazy
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by Jackee_line on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 04:46:27 PM AEST
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| I found this to be a very sincere, open loving write. Well done, this will help others i"m sure. |
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Re: To all those they call crazy
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 05:39:44 PM AEST
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| very bold and brave honest write, well done, and wishing you the best:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: To all those they call crazy
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 06:53:00 PM AEST
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this was so sad it touched me really deep... thnx a lot for sharing this poem.
I used to cut myself cause the pain felt so good,
I loved that line... because I've been there before and can empathize with you totally. Once again a beautiful poem.
Bobo (Joel) |
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