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Fool
Contributed by
little_genna
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Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 02:05:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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How can I be truly what he deserves?
If only he could observe.
He would soon know I am all wrong.
Just like I’ve told him all along.
Why does no ever listen to the fool that is me?
Is it because I seem to say everything so darkly.
You tell me to cheer up.
Well maybe if I could clear up,
The mess that is my mind.
I wouldn’t be so confined.
Looking else where for love,
Than the sweet dove,
That is my guy.
Instead I tell a lie.
For a bit of fun.
But guilty once I’m done.
How can I be what he truly deserves?
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Re: Fool
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by loopylou on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 03:22:56 PM AEST
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ah god!!! you just made me think about a massive lie i told to my boyfriend yesterday!!! ah im overcome with guilt. well i know how you feel now! damit.
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Re: Fool
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by face-in-the-crowd on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 03:34:47 PM AEST
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Hey. Nice write! I know how you feel, I've been in a situation very much like that. Nice work, I enjoyed it!
-Kristen |
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