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promise
Contributed by
little_genna
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Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 01:58:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
limericks
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Going insane.
You’re such a pain.
You make me crazy inside.
We’ve already lied.
You say we’ll be.
Yet I cannot see.
We may have lied,
But I cannot hide.
I love these feelings.
Almost like secret dealings.
Just promise me you’ll never leave.
If you did I would never be able to breathe.
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little_genna
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2004-04-16 13:58:58]
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Re: promise
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by Jackee_line on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 02:56:04 PM AEST
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| Good poem. Well done |
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Re: promise
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by Kie on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 03:41:43 PM AEST
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| Awww this was so full of heart and feeling. I hope this person never leaves you that you write about. Enjoyed your poem. Kie |
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Re: promise
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by face-in-the-crowd on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 10:05:12 AM AEST
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| Great Write! I've read a lot of yours and I really like what you write! |
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Re: promise
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 11:02:31 PM AEST
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| very nice. |
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