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Fat
Contributed by
kailadragon
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Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 01:32:16 PM in AEST
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It happens every single day
she just can't seem to get away
they open their mouth and comment rude
on the quantity of her comsumption of food
she's fat, she's fat she hears them say
but she dosen't cry and run away
she turns around and smiles real big
At least I don't look like a pig
of better yet, answer me that
what exactly is wrong with being fat?
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Re: Fat
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by Bandit2 on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 02:00:33 PM AEST
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| Great job of expressing yourself. Don't ever let anyone pick on you. Those that do are much lower than you!!! Anyone that can write like that has a beautiful soul. In the scheme of things that is all that really matters. After all, beauty really is only skin deep!!! |
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Re: Fat
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by loopylou on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 03:32:29 PM AEST
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| you got the right attuide here hun! i mean its them who miss out if they only judge people on appearances then what kinda people are they guna have sourounding them! i sence you have strong confident nature you dont need them! i love your style of writting keep it comming! and keep on smilling.everyones beutifull! some people are diffrent in diffrent ways,people who call you fat dont have inner beuty whlist im ready to bet anything that you just shine all over!! |
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Re: Fat
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by Kie on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 03:56:29 PM AEST
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Whether skinny or fat people can be ugly. To me real ugliness comes from the inside. The outside is just a package for the treasure within. When I was younger I felt like a stork with knobby knees and elbows. Although I wasn't fat I felt hideous. The people who call you names don't deserve to be your friends. A real person will take the time to get to know you and they'll see you for the jewel you are.
Don't let anyone get you down. Keep writing. Enjoyed this one..
Kie |
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Re: Fat
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 05:22:13 PM AEST
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YOU GO ON WIT YOUR BAD SELF! =)
=)
=)
This made me smile, and I'll tell you why--- "she doesn't cry and run away, she...smiles real big"
Such an amazing thought, to turn the other cheek and instead question THEM, "what exactly is wrong with being fat?"
Excellently done.
God bless,
Ellen |
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Re: Fat
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by Dawny on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 08:56:02 AM AEST
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Absolutley nothing
This is well written, and emotional
I agree completely, it should be about what a person is inside.
Excellent poem, well done
Love Dawny |
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Re: Fat
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by Cursed_Witch on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 12:38:37 PM AEST
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| wonderful , its ironically funny! oops |
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