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Was it a dream
Contributed by
deepdarkthinker
on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 11:34:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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Walking in the room
It all goes quiet
Sensing doom I walk by it
They come one by one to say there respects
I look to detect
Seeing my self
Asking did I resurrectt
It's all a blur
Please tell me how or why i'm in here
Then all goes white
I follow the light
Even though I might
Be not allowed
My hearts apounding
I know i'm daughting
Waking up in my room
To the sound of my mom screaming
My pill bottles gleaming
Realizing the dream was a sign
Just in time
I see the newspaper
Headlines read local teen dies of drug overdose
And there I pose in a picture
ASKING WAS THAT A DREAM
Copyright ©
deepdarkthinker
... [
2004-04-16 11:34:10]
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Re: Was it a dream
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by kailadragon on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 01:33:28 PM AEST
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powerful poem Sandi, check some of mine out and feel free to comment...........
Kaila
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Re: Was it a dream
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by AnGeL_M on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 01:44:11 PM AEST
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Very Powerful Indeed But Written So Well
Keep Em Coming :-)
*****LoVe**AnGeL*****
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Re: Was it a dream
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by afterdark on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 04:54:14 PM AEST
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| Well this was another from of bland teen junkie whore problem poetry..Christ.. |
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