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Remission
Contributed by
sheri
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Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 11:01:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Terminal
incurable
remission
disease in submission
but wait
A mistake
panic
act manic
solution
worse than pollution
destitution
lost hope
no way to cope
addiction
dope
acting moronic
sadistic/ maschostic hit
top ten pills
cheap thrills
bipolar
laugh or cry
do or die
brain is fried.
Copyright ©
sheri
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2004-04-16 11:01:46]
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Re: Remission
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 01:45:50 PM AEST
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Well, it's not tooooo fried to write a nice poem like this. I just recently submitted one with this similar style, titled "One Word".
Keep writing...it keeps the fingers and mind tooo busy for anything else. Goodluck!
Angel always...godspeed...joni |
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Re: Remission
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 02:05:39 PM AEST
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| very clever:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Remission
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by reprobate on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 03:13:17 PM AEST
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| great job |
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Re: Remission
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 10:51:05 PM AEST
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| nice rhymes, dawg,lol. but really it was cool. life is binary code like some of the things you had in your piece. you are either 1 or 0, dead or alive. |
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