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Open
Contributed by
Funny_Pants
on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 11:00:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Open your eyes
See the world
People care
or so I'm told
I am so oblivious
can't see the world I know
can't see the world in front of me
I'm afraid it doesn't show
If my eyes were open
I could see who cared
but I can't see the other side
I'm running cause I'm scared
When I look into your eyes
you look afraid like me
If you'd open your eyes
believe me you would see
There's a beautiful world
all around your soul
people care for all your thoughts
and this is all I know
don't forsake the one who cares
for she is who cares the most
don't look behind yourself
look forward, be sure to hold your post
Copyright ©
Funny_Pants
... [
2004-04-16 11:00:50]
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Re: Open
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by fairy-of-ice on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 01:42:38 PM AEST
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| this is a great poem i can really relate to how ur feeling! i especially like (and know well) the feeling of being oblivious which u describe. a very good write!! |
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Re: Open
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by reprobate on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 02:47:10 PM AEST
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| nice. |
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Re: Open
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by sheri on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 09:10:31 PM AEST
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| I really enjoyed this poem. You desribe being clueless and scared very well. |
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