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Nightyour effect
Contributed by
AbstractMinded
on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 08:07:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Lights flicker on a pale face
Night beckons with arms outstretched
Disappear into the darkness?
Give it all up?
Passing recollection, maybe a thought...
I would but the hour beckons and I am led on again.
As hope thunders with the dawn it also recedes with the night.
Late on in the day
I feel our lives-paling gray
Despite the memories inside
I couldnt help but fell you lied.
Envy, anyone, to help you on your way?
You'll never understand why I had to step through your lies,
Line up and take a another jump
End up tripping on your rope of time
Fall through your handshakes and smiles.
To see...just you.
Aim, aim, terrible aim.
Looks like I had my chance again.
But the wind in my hair
And the soul in my shoe
Makes me run back, straight to you.
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Re: Nightyour effect
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by Hurretje on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 08:35:24 AM AEST
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Wonderful! I like these deeper poems!
Keep it up, you're doing so fine!
Greetz,
Hur |
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Re: Nightyour effect
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by LiveTheDream on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 03:26:38 PM AEST
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i like this one and i think i actually understood it! Glad to c ur still writing the poems.
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Re: Nightyour effect
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by NirvanaLotus on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 04:05:02 PM AEST
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| wow hon, amazing... i dont comment much on poems, i read a lot, but... i cant come to commenting except for the poems that i connect with, so if i post something else later to you saying i can connect with you, thats why.... and believe me i know what you mean by this poem and it is beutifully written. god, keep it up. amazing |
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