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To Goddess Lovely
Contributed by
Nelly
on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 06:10:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Forgive mine eyes
Oh, divine goddess.
To thine great beauty
They have been witness.
For unworthy am I
A lowly swain
To admire such splendor
Must ye disdain?
Forgive mine heart
Ay, goddess lovely.
Thy blissful charm
Thy peaceful glory,
For unworthy am I
A swarthy swain
To adore such beauty
Must ye disdain?
Forgive this man before ye
Oh, goddess lovely.
Forgive mine eyes
Forgive mine heart
For loving thee reluctantly.
Worthy am I not
A craven swain
For mine heart to beat only
For thee, my love
For thee!
Ye must disdain!
Ye must disdain!
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Nelly
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2004-04-16 06:10:43]
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Re: To Goddess Lovely
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 08:10:20 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC!
This is a fine, fine poem you've written here. You use repetition with precision to reinforce the idea of 'the unrequited', as it were, and I empathised readily to the words . . .
"Forgive mine eyes
Forgive mine heart
For loving thee reluctantly. "
I will look out for more of your poems.
Well done. |
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Re: To Goddess Lovely
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by mickie on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 10:04:23 AM AEST
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| I LOVE IT! YOU CAPTURE THE VERY POSTIVE OUTLOOK OF LOVE. KEEP IN TOUCH, OKAY! GOD BLESS! |
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