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rhasta blue
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 03:22:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Signatures By
The Tired Lion
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listen with your soul to this captivating creature,
fore he is a good teacher of very odd features,
fluttery little wings to get around
to pick his big feet off the ground,
mauve faerie ears; love to dry your tears
he's gaurded an egg for all these years,
he looks as though he just might bite
but in his sweet heart is pure delight,
his essence radiates warmth
he catches moonbeams for fun,
but don't even try to catch him
or he will have you on the run,
this being lives in the forest
with many others of his kind,
alas; no matter how much we humans look
they are impossible to find,
gentle fluffed blue fur; wise and so mellow,
he is a different mysterious sort of fellow.
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Copyright ©
ladyfawn
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Re: rhasta blue
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by shelby on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 03:25:26 AM AEST
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sooooooo adorable and witty light hearted but still can make my eyes misty I meant it when I said you can move me Nessa!!
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by emystar on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 03:31:34 AM AEST
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this is so cute. Kindda ugly but cute.
Great work girlfriend!
luv, huggs,
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by venkat on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 03:46:35 AM AEST
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| Yea..this is really captivating..and very fine description.. huggies..:-) venkat |
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Re: rhasta blue
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by Hurretje on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 04:27:18 AM AEST
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O, this is truly beautiful and sweet.
*faints in awe*
Hugs,
Hur |
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Re: rhasta blue
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by Rakerman1999 on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 11:00:25 AM AEST
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yes...adorable is the perfect word for this. So light and fresh, just beautiful Nessa. I love it!!
Roses
Larry |
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by arden on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 11:55:57 AM AEST
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oh what a cute poem, but i kinda find the picture somewhat creepy lol sorry.
the poem was awesome, went so well with the picture. amazing work. i loved this.
Arden |
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Re: rhasta blue
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by AnGeL_M on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 12:36:03 PM AEST
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Very Beautiful Nessa ..The Picture Went So Well With The Poem :-)
I Like It !!!!!!! Great Write Keep Em Coming.....
*******LoVe**AnGeL********
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Re: rhasta blue
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 01:39:48 PM AEST
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Awww hun thats just soooo cute! lmao I dont think its weird at all. Love poem Ness its beautiful
Love 'n Big Hugs
- Becca |
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Re: rhasta blue
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by Kie on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 02:04:13 PM AEST
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You always come up with the snazziest of titles. This poem was simply adorable. Maybe a follow up? This would also make a wonderful childrens story. Loved it..
Kie |
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Re: rhasta blue
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by Merry on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 02:44:15 PM AEST
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wonderful - bravo - a beautiful fantasy write - hmmmm does this creature resemble a large dog by accident? LOL I think you might make a pet of this one if you could only cathc him.
hugs & daisies
merry
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Re: rhasta blue
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 02:46:08 PM AEST
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Awesome! Simply awesome! You got what it takes my friend!Love it!!!
The pic is adorable! He can sleep in my bed any ol' time! lol
Angel always...godspeed..joni |
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 02:51:51 PM AEST
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Awesome! Simply awesome! You got what it takes my friend!Love it!!!
The pic is adorable! He can sleep in my bed any ol' time! lol
Angel always...godspeed..joni |
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Re: rhasta blue
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by Putteragain on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 03:00:26 PM AEST
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makes me want to hold him and feel the softness of his skin your words just flow so gracefully nessa your work is the best
hugs(( ))
michelle |
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Re: rhasta blue
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by Angelic_Demon on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 03:20:33 PM AEST
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LMAO! Love it! That little dude in the picture is absolutely adorable!
Love Mars
xoxoxo
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 06:17:15 PM AEST
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Very adorable write, Ness...Pic is lovable too (not)...lol...
Luv and Huggies...
Jenni |
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 04:51:11 PM AEST
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Nessa, this was so enchanting. And the picture is sweet. He doesnt look to me like he could bite, he'd never hurt a soul. :) I want a guardian of blue...
Great Write
Lindsey |
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by Cynthia on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 05:25:11 PM AEST
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| WOW! Excellent write Nessa. I will miss you too my dear friend. I will always be thinking of you. *HUGS* *S* Cynthia |
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Re: rhasta blue
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by nauphragus on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 03:55:58 PM AEST
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this is wonderful.
the way you were caught by this supernatural creature and you took your readers into his floating world...
that way was just fascinating. |
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Re: rhasta blue
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by MoonlitAngel on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 12:22:21 PM AEST
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Nessa, I just had to tell you that I bought a deck of faerie oracle cards yesterday, and one of them is your picture on this poem... lol... so he's supposed to be a faery. I was looking through the deck and I saw that one and I just cracked up. Oh man. Good stuff. :)
~ Dee |
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by Lee on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 09:28:27 PM AEST
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It's the surreal eel y,know feel
What an intriguing little thing-a-ma-bob.
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Re: rhasta blue
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 3rd September 2010 @ 04:55:58 AM AEST
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| nice poem.. i like it.. keep writing.. |
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