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Yes... i must
Contributed by
corrupted_minds
on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 03:03:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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The mirror’s reflection show’s her,
And all that she may be,
No man would ever love her,
All of us could see,
Deformed she was,
From head to toe,
And from ear to ear,
Whenever someone saw her face,
They’d scream and run in fear,
She never really understood,
Why she had no friends,
She never had real knowledge,
Of the latest trends,
But soon she was going end this,
And change what had become,
After she had said her good-byes,
She knew she was nearly done,
She ran to her bedroom,
With tears of joy and lust,
She raised the knife above her wrist,
And whispered “yes I must�.
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2004-04-16 03:03:00]
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Re: Yes... i must
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by waos on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 03:07:55 AM AEST
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that was so sad. oh my goodness...*hugshugshugs*
if u want to talk i will listen.
good write! |
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Re: Yes... i must
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by Hurretje on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 03:17:52 AM AEST
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Very sad and haunting!
Peace to you!
Hur |
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Re: Yes... i must
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by reilt on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 04:29:53 AM AEST
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| this is so sad....excellent write though...you are very talented. take care of yourself |
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Re: Yes... i must
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by Dizza_13 on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 04:29:18 AM AEST
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Powerful really really good, no great poem. Always great to read. Has a great rythm 2.
Dizza |
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Re: Yes... i must
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 3rd September 2010 @ 04:53:35 AM AEST
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| nice poem.. i like it.. keep writing.. |
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