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Phycotic
Contributed by
corrupted_minds
on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 03:00:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I’m a skilled plague,
That could kill us all,
Or so that’s what you said,
For every time you raped me,
I just wanted to be dead,
If I didn’t do as you said,
You threw me to the ground,
Now I’m old enough to defend,
And to stand my ground,
You made me feel inferior,
I told them what you’d done,
They told me that I was crazy,
So then I took your gun,
I’d end my psychotic behavior,
Or your mental abuse,
I’m done with you and this world,
I was a mental on the loose,
No one can take back,
What you’ve done to me,
Taken away my childhood,
And what I was to be,
I take the gun to your temple,
The trigger seems so sweet,
I was finally in control,
I had you on hand and feet,
I turn the gun to face myself,
I feel a different pain,
Creating a stairway to heaven,
Where I could be sane.
Copyright ©
corrupted_minds
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2004-04-16 03:00:41]
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Re: Phycotic
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 03:55:03 AM AEST
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*stares in shock at what she's just read*
wow awesome totally kewl!!!
a very honest poem...
i could almost feel the vibes, excellent rhythm.
i went through the same thing myself my dad used to rape me the whole time...*scratches her head*...mind you i'm not old enough to "stand my ground" yet as i'm only 12...but he just suddenly stopped....maybe he got bored or knew I could tell my boyfriend any time and that my b/f could fix him up right or something or maybe--
okay I think I should stop rambling on and on now...i always get carried away...
oh and by the way mu username is "weeping_dolphin" i'm just having trouble logging in though...
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Re: Phycotic
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by emystar on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 04:00:48 AM AEST
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So sad but I can relate in some ways.
I know the agony of not knowing how to give luv 'cause of one sick human being. Still, I can't let his stupidity ruin my chance at life. My uncle killed himself years back but if I took my own life then he would have one.
I'm a surviver. I will never forget what happen and I'll never have the joy of giving myself willingly for the first time.
I'm a survivor and there's lotssa things I'll never do but I survived.
Please hang in there 'cause this person created their own hell but You can find peace without dieing.
Luv, huggs, survival,
emy
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Re: Phycotic
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by reilt on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 04:33:02 AM AEST
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| this is so sad...it brought tears to my eyes...please take care of yourself...love and hugs |
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Re: Phycotic
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by Dizza_13 on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 04:21:03 AM AEST
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wow. Sad, touching beautiful. Yet again a incredible work. Truly amazing.
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Re: Phycotic
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 04:31:29 AM AEST
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this is such a heartfelt beautifully written poem, so well done, very classy:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Phycotic
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by deathdrop on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 12:54:42 PM AEST
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another eye opener to say the least.
truly magnificent work here.
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Re: Phycotic
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 3rd September 2010 @ 04:53:08 AM AEST
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| nice poem.. i like it.. keep writing.. |
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