|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
A Walk Through Yesterday
Contributed by
strange_lindsey
on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 01:50:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
|
The empty swing, the quiesent air
With every memory, more despair
She blinks the sunlight from her eyes
These moments end without surprise.
Envision now what lies ahead
Past familiar houses blue and red
She smiles when she remembers the trees
Laughs then cries; at the cemetary, on her knees.
It's been years, she never looked back
Eyelids draw closed, phantoms attack
Retina's exhausted from every belated apology
Flashes at the noise of his eulogy.
Once she saw his soul take flight
She dreamt, she too, soared free that night
Hand in hand, love filled her heart
A dream of death and then depart.
Copyright ©
strange_lindsey
... [
2004-04-16 01:50:02]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: A Walk Through Yesterday
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 01:55:16 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Once she saw his soul take flight
She dreamt, she too, soared free that night
these two lines gave me wonderful images, an excellent piece of work.
wildej. |
|
|
Re: A Walk Through Yesterday
(User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 02:16:19 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
dearest lindsey, this is brilliantly vividly written, the two of you write nicely together, looking forward to more, i love the images in this poem:) hugs n' love nessa
@->>->- |
|
|
Re: A Walk Through Yesterday
(User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 02:22:44 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
breathtaking and haunting mixed with sadness an excellant write
michelle |
|
|
Re: A Walk Through Yesterday
(User Rating: 1 )
by Vitreous_Soul on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 02:50:39 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
This is so graceful, so beautiful...this is the best i've seen from you, and shoots into the upper echelon of YPDC elite. It is THAT good. You should be proud; the rhyme is perfect, the flow is mellifluous, and the images sublime. A true work of art, this left me in awe.
Truly,
-Dan |
|
|
Re: A Walk Through Yesterday
(User Rating: 1 )
by arden on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 01:44:47 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
just breathtakingly beautiful, so well written just perfect. you did a wonderful job, keep it up.
Arden |
|
|
Re: A Walk Through Yesterday
(User Rating: 1 )
by AspenGlow on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 06:42:48 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Beautiful memory, when one close dies, part of our heart dies too. It in memories of them, we can live again. Your poems always make me stop and think. Thank you for sharing. |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
