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ECHOOS OF YESTERDAY
Contributed by
emystar
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Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 01:03:00 AM in AEST
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Sitting here where I grew up
alone in my own world
Grew up wholesome
a bare footed country girl.
Echoos of yesturday lives
Dad, Mom, eight kids
back here in woods
with snakes, birds, katydids
Echoos, echoos of yesturday lives.
Momma's fried apple pies
could win anyone's taste buds.
Her baked bisquits, ummmmm
Was here when she baked her last one.
Daddy's fresh veggies, healthy.
fresh milk from ole Jersy cow.
Momma's chickens gave fresh eggs.
Life so much simpler than now.
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emystar
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Re: ECHOOS OF YESTERDAY
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by amalyna on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 01:21:58 AM AEST
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| I really felt the nostalgia when I read it....good job! |
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Re: ECHOOS OF YESTERDAY
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 01:59:27 AM AEST
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fancy a chilhood swap sounds wonderful!
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 02:16:05 AM AEST
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oh emy girl! how true! what a charming poem!! hugs n' love nessa
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Re: ECHOOS OF YESTERDAY
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by shelby on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 03:22:25 AM AEST
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this is a touching write those memories so precious reminds me of my childhood as well wonderfully done
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Re: ECHOOS OF YESTERDAY
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by Hurretje on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 04:31:06 AM AEST
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Such sweet memories woven in a precious reverie. Simply beautiful.
Hugs,
Hur |
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Re: ECHOOS OF YESTERDAY
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by reilt on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 04:36:55 AM AEST
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| such a beautifully charming poem...and so true that everything now seems so much harder than childhood...i loved it |
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Re: ECHOOS OF YESTERDAY
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by Cynthia on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 05:13:37 AM AEST
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| I was on a farm when I was younger. Hehe used to chase the chickens around the yard. Great write emy. Thanks for the memories. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: ECHOOS OF YESTERDAY
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 09:19:04 AM AEST
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Oh Emy, this is wonderful. I remember those times as a child on the farm, running and playing and growing strong. Till one day I decided I need to leave for the big ole world. I participated for a while but came back here as fast as I could. Now I am happy once again. Life in the fast lane does take its toll on one. I just love this piece.
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Re: ECHOOS OF YESTERDAY
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by Kie on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 02:06:28 PM AEST
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From the title to the ending I absolutely loved this poem so much. It not only made me nostalgic for childhood but it also painted a picture of your childhood to the reader. One of your best.
Kie |
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Re: ECHOOS OF YESTERDAY
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by AnGeL_M on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 08:55:40 PM AEST
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This Was A Very Interesting Read....I Liked It From Begining To End.... :-) Lovely And Sweet ...Nicely Written Emy....
******LoVe**AnGeL*******
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Re: ECHOOS OF YESTERDAY
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 06:09:14 AM AEST
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What lovely memories you have Emystar. And so beautifully penned. Very moving!.
Thanks for sharing these precious memories with us.
Love and peace
Elizabeth Dandy
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Re: ECHOOS OF YESTERDAY
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by kidpoet_213 on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 12:31:42 PM AEST
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Hey momma...
Beautiful poem... I almost cried reading it... thinking about my days of childhood. Thanks so much for the trip back in time...
yo daughter,
~Donna~ |
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Re: ECHOOS OF YESTERDAY
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by Rose on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 08:36:28 AM AEST
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Hi Emy,
Great write. I could feel the way back to the kind of life I had in the country as a child too. Made me think of this, when I read your write. Very nice Take care,
AMber Rose :) |
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Re: ECHOOS OF YESTERDAY
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 09:57:00 PM AEST
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Such a sweet- beautiful poem. Great Work
Hugs 'n Love
- Becca |
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Re: ECHOOS OF YESTERDAY
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by arden on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 10:08:13 PM AEST
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such a beautiful write.
the picture was really cool and the poem was just outstanding. amazing work.
Arden |
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Re: ECHOOS OF YESTERDAY
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by Rhei76 on
Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 01:30:59 AM AEST
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Beautiful memories.
Beautiful voice.
Take care girl. |
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Re: ECHOOS OF YESTERDAY
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by Hurretje on
Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 03:21:44 AM AEST
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Wonderful image,
wonderful poem.
So powerful these memories of a happy childhood!
Great! Keep 'em coming!
Hugs,
Hur |
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Re: ECHOOS OF YESTERDAY
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by mountainhigh on
Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 04:15:11 AM AEST
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Sweetest dream, brings tears of happiness and voices of a past, reminds me of circles.
Thank you for this. Very Beautiful. |
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Re: ECHOOS OF YESTERDAY
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 09:45:18 PM AEST
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Awwww this is really very lovely Emy... I loved it... thanks for the memories....
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: ECHOOS OF YESTERDAY
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by OMEGA_ on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 05:28:44 AM AEST
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| u know something i see that in most of your poems you r trying to reflect your real soul and thats what makes you so honest in your expression ... great work from a calm soul |
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Re: ECHOOS OF YESTERDAY
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by blueheart on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 09:06:50 PM AEST
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| Nostalgic poem indeed. I loved the way you looked back on your childhood, all those wonderful memories. Made me sit and think about my own childhood. :) |
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Re: ECHOOS OF YESTERDAY
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by JennyFruFru on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 08:35:09 PM AEST
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| i miss the good ole days....... :) |
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Re: ECHOOS OF YESTERDAY
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by IamChrisHuff on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 05:49:01 PM AEST
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Thanks for commenting on my poems.
Here's my edition:
Great write. It makes me think back to memories that someone else had. Yours, perhaps?
Maybe we can be buddies.
Coolness
Peace up, A-town down.
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Re: ECHOOS OF YESTERDAY
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 10:21:09 PM AEST
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| im still a child and i can barely even remember anything. ::perplexed:: great write. |
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