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Growing sour
Contributed by
rhei76
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Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 11:21:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Growing sour in my mind
Old and bitter thru the passing time
Feelings of an unsympathic mode
While learning a living code
I feel just like so
So I pitty what I know
Growing sour in my bones
Old and bitter from the breaking tones
Tired of the apathy and rules
While living with these dying fools
I feel just like so
So I pitty what I know
Growing sour in these days
Old and bitter from the haze
My time has been beatin' numb
While I can't remember if it was fun
I feel just like so
So I pitty what I know
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Re: Growing sour
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by Kie on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 01:59:48 PM AEST
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I liked this poem. You know so many people are growing sour. I thought this was original and it stood out.
Kie |
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Re: Growing sour
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by venkat on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 01:08:17 AM AEST
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| you have talent..kepp writing on..don't worry for comments..gradually your writes will get attention..venkat |
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