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Rainbows
Contributed by
forever_lonely
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Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 07:07:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Through the trees, amongst the leaves
Above the clouds, upon a breeze
The sunlight beams, from the skies
The water pours, our forest cries
Each gentle drop, the sunlight's grace
A watered light, a light-quid embrace
These tears persist, but not from pain
Metamorphic bliss, from acts mundane
A cocoon of light, of water walls
Natural prism, rainbows call
Awash of light, spectrum bliss
Orange to green, their whispered kiss
Through the trees, amongst the leaves
Above the clouds, upon the breeze
The sunlight beams, from the skies
The waters pour and rainbows arise
This miracle, of natures ways
From rainy spots in sunny days
A picture painted through the skies
A rainbows why our forest cries
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Re: Rainbows
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 07:15:34 PM AEST
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Rainbows are special to me. This poem examines them in all their luminescent glory.
Lovely.
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Re: Rainbows
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by Brians_Sweety on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 07:57:52 PM AEST
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| Hey this poem is like awesome. You have amazing talent!!!!I hope one day I can be that good. Feel free to check out my poems sometimes. Its mostly about my boyfriend though so if you don't like Mushy Gushy don't read it lol. |
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Re: Rainbows
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 08:07:33 PM AEST
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ahhh luke, absolutely delightfully inspiring, beautifully woven words and very clever:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Rainbows
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by Whisper on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 08:12:09 PM AEST
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Nice
Whisper |
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Re: Rainbows
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 10:11:58 PM AEST
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This is beautiful Luke. A painting of elegance, with astounding words as the palette, your talent the brush. I shall not waste time with my mere accolades, but instead I will use that time to read this masterpiece again.
Truly,
-Dan |
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Re: Rainbows
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 08:57:55 AM AEST
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"These tears persist, but not from pain
Metamorphic bliss, from acts mundane"
Those two lines deserved to be marked by my 500th comment on this site. I'd been scouring the homepage for quite a while for one that deserved it.
You have achieved a flow which is harmonic and effulgent all at once, in trademark inspirosynthesis, using vivacity to its pinnacle of colours and rhyme. I'd go on and on, but I'll stop now, as I must get back to work . . . |
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Re: Rainbows
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by afraid_of_fear on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 08:47:07 AM AEST
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this is so beautiful.. i love it..
charlotte x_x_x |
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Re: Rainbows
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by fallen_eyes on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 04:59:07 PM AEST
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wow u know you have a true gift of being able to capture a specific subject and making it seem so real and alive. this is one thing that i honestly do admire in the way that you right. its inspiring.
t xxx |
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Re: Rainbows
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by blueheart on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 09:20:57 PM AEST
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| Wonderful words Luke, I'm speechless. This was a beautiful piece. And I love rainbows too. :) |
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Re: Rainbows
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 03:11:49 PM AEST
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Luke...that was breath-taking. I cant even begin to explain how great that was...I miss rainbows. :(
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Re: Rainbows
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 05:06:37 PM AEST
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Breathtaking.
Rainbows are so beautiful and so illusive. You can't catch one and stare at it in the palm of your hand but you can stand and watch it and be left in awe of its natural beauty.
The imagery in this poem was extremely good.
Kie |
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