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From the Middle
Contributed by
reilt
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Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 06:08:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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From the middle,
Broken in.
Bewildered, shuddered,
Uncovered.
Winter finds its coat
About a body cold.
No, you are not breath,
You are not skin,
But the sin
That, push comes to shove,
Forces to the forefront.
And 'neath the shadows
Of yester
Day and Year
Falls the feeling fear...
Shrouded in a shawl
Of shame
And the less
Is that bareness is stripped 'fore
The chance of confusion
Gets to disappear.
No, you are not deep,
You are not wide
But the weaker of a nature
That cannot decide,
When, from the middle,
I come
Broken in
And down...
Copyright ©
reilt
... [
2004-04-15 18:08:51]
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Re: From the Middle
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by emystar on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 05:03:23 AM AEST
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Very interesting, unique write.
Great job!
luv, huggs,
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Re: From the Middle
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by Kie on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 10:33:10 AM AEST
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Oh this was incredible, imaginative and it leaves me in awe. Very unique which makes it stand out in my mind.
I can't praise this one high enough. AWESOME!!
Kie |
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Re: From the Middle
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by reprobate on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 05:30:46 PM AEST
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The infinite sad of regret ---you are not skin...but the sin
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