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Disease
Contributed by
the_story_of_the_year
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Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 05:02:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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If love was a disease
I'd have one day to live
I caught it so quickly
And there's no cure to give
Giving it is hard
When they will not receive
This gift hurts to hold
It soon can make you bleed
But believe me
This disease I want to keep
The side effects are a smile
A hug
A dream
A kiss for while
The simple feeling
That can grab hold
To my entire being
To my entire soul
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the_story_of_the_year
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2004-04-15 17:02:19]
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Re: Disease
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by Remy on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 06:31:32 PM AEST
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peculiar way of looking at it, i like your prospective! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: Disease
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 08:49:14 PM AEST
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| Good way to express how love feels, it can hurt when they don't feel the same, but even then, it's so wonderful |
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Re: Disease
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 01:19:02 AM AEST
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wow that is a very good and catchy way of looking at love...it does hurt and I feel your pain...well keep your head held high...
read and comment my stuff if you want Id love to hear what you think
much love,
Dani |
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