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5 shots fresh
Contributed by
Matsukaze
on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 04:37:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Into the backland I walk
With pistol in hand
And with this tool I'll use
To sound my symbol.
FIVE shots...!!!...For every time I am hurt...!!!
FIVE shots...!!!...For every time I am mad...!!!
FIVE shots...!!!...For every time I am wronged...!!!
You see, fantasy is no match for reality
But most people cant accept that, or realize it.
I have a bad habit of seeing things for what they really are.
It's amazing how much anger the truth can produce.
FIVE shots...!!!...For every time I am wronged.
And then I reload, FIVE shots fresh
For next time
Maybe you.
Copyright ©
Matsukaze
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2004-04-15 16:37:35]
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Re: 5 shots fresh
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by waos on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 04:45:13 PM AEST
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u definetely captured the anger
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Re: 5 shots fresh
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by Remy on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 06:34:38 PM AEST
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you know what shirt you need? the one that says, "guns don't kill people; i do!" just a thought... good write! ;0)
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