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Contributed by
rhei76
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Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 01:38:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I use to have so much for the page
but I'm losing my rage
for I have dawned on a new phase
I use to put words on words
just as swift as a penciling sword
but all that is gone
my thoughts are just a bore
I use to have hate and anger
seeping into my paper
but all now is acid free
with no true struggling
sure I'm still here and things are struggling
but they don't weigh on same
maybe I'm growing up
maybe I'm just lame
maybe it's something else
maybe it's just the game
Copyright ©
rhei76
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2004-04-15 13:38:51]
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Re: something
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by Remy on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 01:53:20 PM AEST
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or maybe it's just that edgy little thing called a writer's block! lol, joking... but really now - don't worry, the spirit in your words returns time and again... it's what makes you a "writer" ;0)
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Re: something
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by persia on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 02:47:43 PM AEST
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dis iz so true 4 writerz. coz u av dem dry spellz & itz f***in annoyin'.
but dont worry coz da anger comez bck-trust!
keep writng coz dis poem statez u can
Persia |
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Re: something
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by jaeann on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 03:34:41 PM AEST
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| sounds like my head when i'm going through a writing block.............. |
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