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Un-named Love
Contributed by
Lost_Shadow
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Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 12:23:11 PM in AEST
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With his aches and pains for one true love,
Just as the wind flows through the trees,
He finds that one rare beauty among them all,
And cares much for this flower deeply.
To once when I see them together,
The moon so brightly full,
The stars dance and sing around.
With the distance between him and who he loved,
Caring only for the love among all,
His heart can contain nothing for no other
But the one true chér through time and shadow.
With a whisper of her name, his heart begins to hurt
Being away for so long only made him stronger
Towards the one I mention no name.
I can only hope and with all I know
That they reunite and the fire rekindle.
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Lost_Shadow
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2004-04-15 12:23:11]
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Re: Un-named Love
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by Rhei76 on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 01:24:08 PM AEST
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| nicely written. good luck to your friends |
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Re: Un-named Love
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by Remy on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 01:50:02 PM AEST
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well this write seems a bit familiar, lovely tribute... good writing! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: Un-named Love
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by genuine on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 02:42:29 PM AEST
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| aww. this makes my heart smile and my eyes mist at the same time. |
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Re: Un-named Love
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by lonely_kakashi on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 04:04:23 PM AEST
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u cheap tart!!!! lol
Thanks for the tribute, but i can only wish, reallist i am when i comes to her,
Thanks anyway
:D
Kakashi |
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Re: Un-named Love
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by reilt on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 06:29:51 PM AEST
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| really well written...i liked it a lot |
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Re: Un-named Love
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by little_genna on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 01:43:31 AM AEST
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thanks for the dedication towards me and lonely_kakashi. but i dont know if we can every rekindel that fire that we had such ablaze for years.
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