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-^o^- That Rowdy Rabbit -^o^-
Contributed by
Cynthia
on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 12:10:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
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What's all the commotion
going on this
late at night?
It must be
that rowdy rabbit
up to no good.
"QUIET DOWN OUT THERE,
YOU"LL WAKE ME KIDS!"
Is there no
peace and quiet
in the world today?
He's running around
me darn house,
banging and thumping
off the ruddy walls.
I walk into the kitchen
and what do I see?
The dang beggar
is up on me counter,
munching out on the kids
chocolate chip cookies.
"GET DOWN OUTTA THERE!"
I smacked him
in the head and
he fell onto the floor,
he scrambled to get
back up onto his feet.
"I'm going to teach
you a lesson on
how to be quiet."
I grabbed
that rowdy rabbit
by his long ears
and whipped him
across the room.
He tried to scurry off
when I grabbed him
by his furry tail,
"Where do you think
you are going?"
I punched him in the face
and knocked him out cold,
"That'll teach ya
to mess with me."
He had a big black eye
and his ears were
twisted out of shape,
his tail was just about gone,
as I stood over him
with a handful of fur.
"Maybe when you come back
here again next year,
you'll be a little more quiet."
I dusted myself off
and went back to bed.
Copyright Cynthia Jones
Apr.12/2004
Copyright ©
Cynthia
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2004-04-15 12:10:13]
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Re: -^o^- That Rowdy Rabbit -^o^-
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by Remy on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 01:56:59 PM AEST
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lmao!! oh wow, this is cute... late or early, it fits everything and brings a smile, good write! ;0)
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Re: -^o^- That Rowdy Rabbit -^o^-
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by Chade on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 02:11:40 PM AEST
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lol. thats cool.
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Re: -^o^- That Rowdy Rabbit -^o^-
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by AnGeL_M on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 03:43:40 PM AEST
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LoL This Is So Cute :-) I Enjoyed It...No Matter If It's Late Or Not
It's Still An Enjoyable Read...Keep Em Coming.....God Bless
*******LoVe**AnGeL*******
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Re: -^o^- That Rowdy Rabbit -^o^-
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 03:55:58 PM AEST
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Boy, I felt sorry for that bad bunny, lol. I bet he behaves next year! This was so cute. I am glad you posted it, late or not. It is always a good time for a laugh and smile.
hugs,
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Re: -^o^- That Rowdy Rabbit -^o^-
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by Kie on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 04:05:43 PM AEST
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I think this would make an excellent childrens book. Seriously kids would love it! I know cause i'm an overgrown kid and I loved it..
Kie |
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Re: -^o^- That Rowdy Rabbit -^o^-
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by Hurretje on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 05:27:01 AM AEST
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Haha! Kill the Easter bunnies! Kill! Kill! Great stuff, I like it a lot!
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Re: -^o^- That Rowdy Rabbit -^o^-
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by arden on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 11:37:40 AM AEST
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lol cute and clever. nicely done i enjoyed it.
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Re: -^o^- That Rowdy Rabbit -^o^-
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 12:52:56 PM AEST
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That told him! did you hit him with a rabbit punch? (groans) nice write.
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Re: -^o^- That Rowdy Rabbit -^o^-
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 05:15:14 AM AEST
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| i drew some pretty morbid pictures of the easter bunny on easter.....they were pretty funny, kinda reminds me of this lol |
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Re: -^o^- That Rowdy Rabbit -^o^-
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by skinsfan on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 12:45:01 AM AEST
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| Gotta love that humor. That rabbit will never be the same. Nice write. skinsfan |
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