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Held Me Down
Contributed by
Alli
on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 11:45:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I was going to jump, but he held me down
I was put on a pedestal and given a crown
I wanted to fight, and he held me back
Held me tight when I thought I was going to crack
Made me smile when all I could do was frown
He held me up when I had started to drown
I wanted to run, but he stayed at my side
Always told him the truth, but he thought I had lied
After a while a drastic change
Was once fully stable, now begins to derange
But I fear it's too late, I'm in too deep
He holds the door as I sit on the floor and weep
I wanted to go out but he held me in
No matter what I do, I can never win
Wanted to sleep but he shook me awake
The bonds of sanity have started to break
I wanted to run, but he held me down
I wanted to fly, but he held me down
I started to cry as he held me down
The blood came out flowing as he pushed my head down
My breaths came out fewer as I layed on the ground
Who is this I once knew and loved
Who is this glaring down from above
I wanted to leave, but he held me back
I hear the sound of my skull beginning to crack
I take my last breath and shed my last tear
At least now I will have nothing more to fear
I should've got out after the very first round
I wanted to live, but he just held me down.
2001
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Alli
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2004-04-15 11:45:50]
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Re: Held Me Down
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by kidpoet_213 on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 02:14:43 PM AEST
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She sounds as though she's living in her own private living hell... one from which there is no escape...
Good write... loved it...
~Donna~ |
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Re: Held Me Down
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by Rhei76 on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 03:03:00 PM AEST
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| This piece sounds so true in the accordance of being with some one for stablility, not for love. It sounds like unity without the flux of indivisualility. It is a great write. But sad in the meaning I find. Good job. |
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