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Blindfolded
Contributed by
fairy-of-ice
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Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 10:46:54 AM in AEST
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Please don't...
leave me alone once again
but I just can't afford to be in your company,
when this is how you feel.
You speak to me as if you are trying to blindfold me from a lie going on in front of my face.
Don't think im as blind as my eyes tell you or that I don't cry like they say, cos i do.
Maybe you're the blind one. The one whos throwing away me. The one who's throwing away what they cant see.
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Re: Blindfolded
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by MyLastBreath on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 11:49:51 AM AEST
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definitely been in that situation. That poem showed exactly how I felt as well. Nice job!
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Re: Blindfolded
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by Kie on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 12:35:25 PM AEST
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A warm welcome to YPDC. You have talent and you express emotion well. If you placed this into stanzas I think it would be easier to read. I liked it.
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Re: Blindfolded
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by holderofthestone on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 03:34:07 PM AEST
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| nice. this hit home for me reminds me of how i feel about someone in my life. great read |
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